The Ranchman — Edition Insights
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She was almost tall, and the ease and grace of her movements sufficed to convey to the tourist some conception of the symmetrical lines of her figure. If her features had been more regular, the girl would have been plain; but there was a slight uptilt to her nose that hinted of piquancy, denied by the quiet, steady eyes.
A brown mass of hair, which she had twisted into bulging coils and glistening waves, made the tourist wonder over her taste in that feminine art.
“She knows what becomes her,” he decided.
He knew the two men seated in front of the young man were traveling with her, for he had seen them together, with the older man patting her shoulder affectionately. But often she left them with their talk, which did not seem to interest her, while she withdrew to a distant seat to read or to gaze out of the window.
She had not seemed to notice either the man of colorless personality or the young man who occupied the seat behind her friends. If she had glanced at them at all it was with that impersonal interest one feels in the average traveler one meets anywhere.
But long ago—which, to be strictly accurate, was when he had entered the coach at Kansas City—Quinton Taylor had been interested in her. He was content, though, to conceal that interest, and not once when she chanced to look toward him did she catch him looking at her.
Taylor knew he was no man to excite the interest of women, not even when he looked his best. And he knew that in his present raiment he did not look his best. He was highly uncomfortable.
For one thing, the white, starched collar he wore irritated him, choked him, reddening his face and bulging his eyes. The starched shirt had a pernicious habit of tightly sticking to him, the seams chafing his skin.
The ready-made suit he had bought at Kansas City was too small, and he could feel his shoulders bulging through the arms of the coat, while the trousers—at the hips and the knees—were stretched until he feared the cloth would not stand the strain.
The shoes were tight, and the derby hat—he glowered humorously at it in the rack above his head and gazed longingly at the suitcase at his feet, into which he had crammed the clothing he had discarded and which he had replaced at the suggestion of his banker in Kansas City. Cowboy rigging was not uncommon to Kansas City, the banker had told him, but still—well, if a man was wealthy, and wished to make an impression, it might be wise to make the change.
Not in years had Taylor worn civilized clothing, and he was fully determined that before reaching his home town he would resume the clothing to which he was accustomed—and throw the new duds out of a window. He reddened over an imaginary picture of himself descending from the train in his newly acquired rigging to endure the humorous comments of his friends. Old Ben Mullarky, for instance, would think he had gone loco—and would tell him so. Yes, the new clothes were doomed; some ragged overland specimen of the genus “hobo” would probably find them or, if not, they would clutter up the right-of-way as the sad memento of a mistake he had made during a fit of momentary weakness.
As a matter of fact the girl had noticed Taylor. A girl will notice men, unconsciously. Sitting at her window even now, she was thinking of him.
She was not aware that she had studied him, or that she had even glanced at him. But despite her lack of interest in him she had a picture of him in mind, and her thoughts dwelt upon him.
She, too, had been aware that Taylor’s clothes did not fit him. She had noticed the bulging shoulders, the tight trousers, the shoes, squeaking with newness, when once he had passed through the car to go out upon the platform. She had noticed him screwing his neck around in the collar; she had seen him hunch his shoulders intolerantly; she had seen that the trousers were too short; that he looked like an awkward farmer or homesteader abroad on a pleasure trip, and decidedly uncomfortable in the unaccustomed attire.
The opening chapter of The Ranchman establishes a deliberate, almost languid narrative pace. The air in the Pullman is hot and dusty, the electric fans futile, and the desert panorama offers “not one cool vista.” A blasé tourist watches fellow passengers with cynical amusement, noting a girl who shudders at something outside—perhaps a steer’s skeleton or a rattlesnake. Seltzer’s prose lingers on discomfort and observation before the story accelerates into violent confrontations and breathless escapes.
Pace as a Narrative Tool
The novel’s rhythm shifts markedly between chapters. Early scenes in the Pullman and at Dawes’s ranch unfold with measured detail: the drone of fans, the glare of sun, the “feathery alkali dust.” Later, the pace tightens. Carrington’s rages are punctuated by slamming doors and overturned furniture. Martha’s vigil at the window—watching, waiting, fearing a subterfuge—creates a staccato of short paragraphs and quick actions: “Again Martha looked out of a window. This time she saw Carrington on his horse, riding away.” The contrast between the opening’s static heat and the later frantic searches gives the story a pulsing, uneven tempo that mirrors the characters’ rising tension.
Voice and Dialect
Seltzer layers his narrative voice with two distinct registers. The third-person narrator often adopts a detached, almost journalistic tone: “The tourist was a transcontinental traveler of note and he had few expectations.” But dialogue and interior moments shift into colloquial dialect, especially through Martha, whose speech is rendered phonetically: “Laws A’mighty, what a ragin’ devil that man is, honey!” This contrast between the narrator’s polished sentences and Martha’s vernacular creates a textured soundscape. Carrington’s polite menace—“Tell your mistress I am sorry for what has occurred”—further highlights how voice can mask or reveal intent, with the calm words belying his earlier violence.
Sensory Anchors and Setting
The physical environment is not mere backdrop but an active force. The desert’s “dead lava” and “cacti with thorny spire” are described with a naturalist’s eye, while the Pullman’s dust and heat become almost characters themselves. Later, the interior spaces—Martha’s room, the stable, the trap-door—are rendered through sound and motion: the “slam of doors,” the “raging through the house,” the “malevolent look.” Seltzer uses sensory details to ground emotional states: the girl’s pallor, the “queer pallor on her face,” echoes the bleached bones of the desert. These recurring images of heat, dust, and hidden spaces tie the physical world to the characters’ psychological strain.
Readers attentive to shifts in tempo will find that Seltzer’s control of pace—from the opening’s static heat to the later frantic searches—creates a narrative that breathes with the characters’ fear and determination. The interplay of polished narration and raw dialect rewards close attention to who speaks and how. The desert and the ranch house are not just settings but active presences that shape every scene.
I recall evenings when the pace of my own life shifted like Seltzer’s prose—dull train windows, then sudden heart-pounding chases. Reading that western, I felt dust and slammed doors. Years later, The Life and Letters of Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley, Volume 1 (of 2) — A Reader’s Guide offered a similar quiet intimacy, her letters lingering like warm static, a different kind of tension—waiting, not running.
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